ext_73379 ([identity profile] playthefool.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] puchuupoet 2010-08-11 06:08 am (UTC)

Okay. So.

I love Pamela. And I especially love Gabe. SO THIS IS PRETTY MUCH AMAZING.

I love that you maintain her strong personality so well - she's ready to fight him even though he's a fucking angel. GUH. Ilu Pamela, she's totally be ready to kick ass. And IDEK but I love that you describe her annoyance at his restraint because, specifically, it's passive aggressive. It seems so Pamela to notice that and be even more annoyed as a result. Like "JUST FUCKING DO IT OR DON'T DO IT NOT THIS SHIT OMFG."

I love her and you wrote her so well!

AND EVEN THOUGH SHE'S FUCKING STRONG THERE'S A VULNERABILITY THERE, IN MAKING SURE THERE'S NOTHING THERE TO HAUNT HER, IN THE SUBTLE FEAR THAT SOMETHING ELSE WILL BE TAKEN AWAY FROM HER. I LOVE THAT DETAIL OF SHREDDING UP THE FLOWERS, MAKING SURE THERE'S NO TRICK TO IT. UGH.

So good. ♥

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