i love you for taking crack pairings and somehow making them FIT it's insane and amazing and HOLYYYYY SHIIIIT i still cannot get over the fact that you wrote this fic with so little visuals i love it it's such an interesting perspective and endears me to pamela so much more be "seeing" as she does
and she is such a badass, i love how you captured that simultaneous fighting spirit as well as fright and i love gabe's resigned brotherliness/apology because of it
for some reason the crayon bit i really loved, the details about how she got them/bobby as well as feeling them Grabs the longest one with her left hand as she reaches out with her right, tracing over the sigils on the kitchen wall. She starts to fill in all the gaps, all the spaces worn away by cooking grease and time and heat. it's a total visual but at the same time goes into er...touch? sense which is sososos neat
and i love the flower bit because she doesn't give a fuck what they LOOK like anymore, so she checks them and crumples them but it doesn't matter because they still smell good and she keeps them~
"Don't tell me, you're different, right? Sweet and sensitive and loves long walks on the beach." this is the line that i both fell in love with your pamela and went OH. they totally could be a pairing
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Date: 2010-08-10 11:52 pm (UTC)it's insane and amazing and
HOLYYYYY SHIIIIT i still cannot get over the fact that you wrote this fic with so little visuals
i love it
it's such an interesting perspective and endears me to pamela so much more be "seeing" as she does
and she is such a badass, i love how you captured that simultaneous fighting spirit as well as fright
and i love gabe's resigned brotherliness/apology because of it
for some reason the crayon bit i really loved, the details about how she got them/bobby as well as feeling them
Grabs the longest one with her left hand as she reaches out with her right, tracing over the sigils on the kitchen wall. She starts to fill in all the gaps, all the spaces worn away by cooking grease and time and heat.
it's a total visual but at the same time goes into er...touch? sense which is sososos neat
and i love the flower bit because she doesn't give a fuck what they LOOK like anymore, so she checks them and crumples them but it doesn't matter because they still smell good
and she keeps them~
"Don't tell me, you're different, right? Sweet and sensitive and loves long walks on the beach."
this is the line that i both fell in love with your pamela and went
OH. they totally could be a pairing