I just want to reiterate that I love where you went with this. You really get a feel for each of the characters through your writing. The tension is natural and believable, Jensen's excitement about the car is OMG ADORABLE, and I love the build up between the two guys... ALL OF IT, LOVE IT ALL. And the end of course, haha. ♥ GREAT JOB!
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Date: 2010-11-10 07:42 am (UTC)